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one day when i was walking home from school more then 10 dogs attacked me. i tried to run away but they were following me. Then i found one high place where the dogs couldn’t climb, and i went to that place. The dogs tried to climb, they were so close. Then i saw one of my neighbours running to me. He helped me and i think he is my hero.

Mistakes and problems (by points):

  1. Spelling and grammar
    • “i” → should be “I” (always capitalized).
    • “more then 10 dogs” → should be “more than 10 dogs.”
    • “wer” → should be “were.”
    • “couldnt” → should be “couldn’t.”
    • “He helped me and i think he is my hero” → should be “He helped me, and I think he is my hero.”
  2. Punctuation
    • Commas should be added for pauses and smoother flow.
    Example:
    One day, when I was walking home, more than 10 dogs attacked me.
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Unsung Hero Writing

One day, when I was about eight years old, I was walking home from school when more than ten dogs suddenly attacked me. I tried to run, but they kept following, barking loudly. My heart was racing, and I felt terrified.

Then I saw a high rock nearby and quickly climbed it. The dogs surrounded me, jumping and barking. I thought I was trapped.

A few minutes later, one of my neighbors ran toward me and scared the dogs away by throwing stones. I finally felt safe.

That day I learned that heroes don’t always wear capes sometimes they’re just ordinary people who help when you need it 

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Thursday: Friendship Map – Each student creates a “Friendship Map” showing their circle of friends, the qualities of these friendships, and how they impact their life.

In my Friendship Map, I put myself in the center, with different groups of friends around me. My closest friends are those I can trust and who would never betray me. They are funny and always support me, and I try to do the same for them.

In a larger circle, I have friends I’m just getting to know and classmates I talk to sometimes.

My close friends help me feel happy and supported, and they give me confidence. I’ve learned that true friendship is built on trust and support, and that’s the kind of relationship I want to have with the people around me.

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Lesson 2

Late at night, she could barely recline on the cold bed. The room was frigid, and something seemed sinister in the shadows. A thing maybe a corpse was partly concealed under a sheet.She felt numb, as if fear had caught her in peril. The air felt dismal and heavy. Suddenly, a distant shriek made her heart jump. She thought of running, or staying. She decided to inhabit her fear instead of letting it win. She would tempt fate, make a wager with herself that courage could grow even in the darkest night.

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English topics

4.My favourite elective school subjects. Are they connected with my future profession?

My favorite elective school subject is drawing, as it is also my hobby. Drawing plays a significant role in my creative development and is somewhat connected to my future profession. Since I aspire to become a 3D modeler, having strong artistic skills, such as sketching and understanding proportions, will be beneficial in my career.