Text:
one day when i was walking home from school more then 10 dogs attacked me. i tried to run away but they were following me. Then i found one high place where the dogs couldn’t climb, and i went to that place. The dogs tried to climb, they were so close. Then i saw one of my neighbours running to me. He helped me and i think he is my hero.
Mistakes and problems (by points):
- Spelling and grammar
• “i” → should be “I” (always capitalized).
• “more then 10 dogs” → should be “more than 10 dogs.”
• “wer” → should be “were.”
• “couldnt” → should be “couldn’t.”
• “He helped me and i think he is my hero” → should be “He helped me, and I think he is my hero.” - Punctuation
• Commas should be added for pauses and smoother flow.
Example:
One day, when I was walking home, more than 10 dogs attacked me.
Սարգսյան Դավիթ բլոգ 